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NewbieJimjim
NewbieJimjimLv31yr
2023-08-08 13:24

I must said that the premise of the story is kinda interesting. the writing is also quite decent and i really enjoy it. It seem you participate in the WPC contest. I wish you the best!

Rise of the Weakest Martial Artist Immortal

Mel_Aniv
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Thanks! what's yours again?

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NewbieJimjim
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go check my bio, you will see it

Mel_Aniv:Thanks! what's yours again?
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done 😎

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