Review Detail of Scarlet_Wolf96 in Phantom Reincarnation: The Final Mage

interesting.the synopsis is pretty good.Each chapter has a different story line, but is able to keep the story in one direction (that's mean, it doesn't seem messy.)a little advice from me. Practice how to write dialogue that is short, but easy to understand.in chapter 1 it was so good. but in other chapters, it seems messy.there is no need to write in detail about the situation of the dialogue conveyed in the story. (I used to be like that too, so I understand that it won't be easy.)when you know about it, the rest you will understand. keep trying. slow but sure.