Review Detail of Eiffel_Olympus in Heatherland.

The story seems to have potential and features well-designed primary characters. However, there's room for improvement in terms of clarifying dialogue and further developing both the story and the world background to create a more immersive experience. With time and refinement, this story could become even more engaging. The author is also very good at creating scenario in story it makes the reader such as me to keep reading.