apart from the addition of a second sword, this fic is a copy of another famous ReZero fic called Why Me by Writer with Bad grammar. he even copied the part about the snack being 2.5 Singaporean dollars. just read the original fanfic
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LIKEif that's the case then fantastic, but I would suggest making changes to the story to make it your own. I mean the protags name from the OG is Aaron and you have some parts in the story refered to your own OC as Aaron as well. the snack part can also be changed with something else. it's a suggestion, you are free to ignore it.
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Yes I am changing slowly you will see the changes soon
BaronBeef:if that's the case then fantastic, but I would suggest making changes to the story to make it your own. I mean the protags name from the OG is Aaron and you have some parts in the story refered to your own OC as Aaron as well. the snack part can also be changed with something else. it's a suggestion, you are free to ignore it.