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TheUngod
TheUngodAuthor1yr
2023-08-05 03:18

Shameless author review here! This is my new novel that I have entered into WPC August 2023! This novel is still fresh so if there are any mistakes don't hesitate to leave a review or comment to let me know so I can fix them! [img=recommend]

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FallenAngeI
FallenAngeILv13

Romance?

TheUngod
TheUngodAuthor

No romance for the foreseeable future

FallenAngeI:Romance?
FallenAngeI
FallenAngeILv13

I see, too bad then. Good luck with the story tho.

TheUngod:No romance for the foreseeable future
Aztec_Azazel
Aztec_AzazelLv13

1st. all humans achieving immortality is very weird of a concept 2nd. why on earth would you choose to give an AI a system ? its redundant. 3rd. am a little bit disappointed but its your work so wish you best luck

TheUngod
TheUngodAuthor

Not all humans have immortality, only Lumen

Aztec_Azazel:1st. all humans achieving immortality is very weird of a concept 2nd. why on earth would you choose to give an AI a system ? its redundant. 3rd. am a little bit disappointed but its your work so wish you best luck
chillyice
chillyiceLv3

so no romance at all? let's go then!

Hossai
HossaiLv4

this is YOUR mistake here then. what a lonely one need? companion and that's is a family. you already made that his characteristic that he is so lonely that even want to die. so how could he will not have a mate 🙄

TheUngod:No romance for the foreseeable future
chillyice
chillyiceLv3

so he can't have friends?

Hossai:this is YOUR mistake here then. what a lonely one need? companion and that's is a family. you already made that his characteristic that he is so lonely that even want to die. so how could he will not have a mate 🙄
ZL_Man_GW
ZL_Man_GWLv13

wow

JBFIRE_77
JBFIRE_77Lv4

i hope there is no romance, i mean like it's a AI not a human being

SupXro_Xro
SupXro_XroLv13

If the author gives a literally ROBOT romance then i think its time to stop reading books cuz romance is everywhere atp

Danni11
Danni11Lv11

So are you going to cry? Hahaha you make so much drama bro 🤣

SupXro_Xro:If the author gives a literally ROBOT romance then i think its time to stop reading books cuz romance is everywhere atp
Leni_Purwanti
Leni_PurwantiLv14

I have a question, why mc intelligence dropped so much, and Isn't most AI's instinct to store information? but why does he just exercise without looking for information on that planet and learn something? I knew that its energy was weakening after it blew itself up, but he only lost some data from the future and didn't make him an idiot, even though he couldn't do it with his power at least he could do it manual there computer sit on his house.

Leni_Purwanti
Leni_PurwantiLv14

oh, don't mind me. I'm interested in the concept of this novel. and I was looking forward to the story, it's just that MC's intelligence dropped which made me disappointed in it. well there cases where some AI was dumb like those dumb system who gave some obvious dumb suggestions to their host, even some host was smarter even pit or scam the system.

Eternalsylph
EternalsylphLv14

Don't worry about readers who only think about romance when the novel is obviously not about that, they always expect romance in novels that are action, I approve that you dare to write something original and not a "how many wives will the mc have?", for True, I'm starting the other novel and if there is romance at least I hope it's 1 fmc please xd[img=recommend]

TheUngod:No romance for the foreseeable future
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Kergonan
KergonanLv15

Transmigrating to Modern Earth from the Future I started to read this novel because I wanted a good short story between the often thousand chapters long chapters tales I’m fond of. So, let’s go first with the one good thing about this book, the author has good grammar. Everything else is a letdown. It is not a short story, it’s a supposed-to-be long novel that has been abandoned by the author, so it’s not a completed story, more a short road leading to nowhere. The original premises, a hyper advanced AI from the ten of thousand of year in the future, sick of its pointless existence, tries to self-destroy ends up in a modern Earth in a human body, is wasted. The main character (Lumen) is a generic isekai character who ends up a collection of tropes, appears quite stupid at the end. And I say Isekai purposefully, as in the first 10 chapters, the action leaves Earth for an unoriginal fantasy tutorial then fantasy world setting, with a system trope which is good at first but unexploited. Finally, the writing is alright at the beginning, but toward the end of the first volume, it starts to go bad, and for the second (and final volume of the tale), the storytelling becomes incoherent, sloppy, repetitive (filler), just bad to the point I had to force myself to read the last chapters. In conclusion, this novel is a wasted opportunity, in character and setting (a cheat, as it almost doesn’t take place in modern Earth), the writing is awful and it is no wonder the author gave it up. My final verdict is a 1 out of 10. P.S: I can’t even thank the author for the effort of writing this novel, as the last 10 chapter were a torture to read, and he did not even have the sincerity to say in the synopsis that it was not a completed tale, but one which would remain unfinished. I wasted my coins for nothing.

raeoflight1985
raeoflight1985Lv15
Goodorbad
GoodorbadLv4
DaoistDdKSaa
DaoistDdKSaaLv1
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