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2023-08-08 15:41

The story is a good one, especially the narrative and its immersive ambiance. There are close to minimal in its mistakes and was a good read. With more chaps, I know it will explode! Keep it up and have a good day!

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Thanks for the review: ]

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Uncle_Moon
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After carefully considering and reading this book, I realized what I should address.. . . . But before that, you should give it a try. It is a very good story with a promising plot..... . The first and very important question: Is it a harem? To truthfully answer that, no. While there are instances where the main character interacts with female supporting characters, it might seem like this is headed towards a harem, but believe me, it's not... . . . . N Now, the second question: Will there be romance? That's a rather complicated answer. To put it simply, yes, there will be But for side character . the main character, romance will be mostly absent, and he will have a very good relationship with a supporting female lead, like a bromance...... ..,.. . Now, a rather important question and my confession:..... .. ... Guys, it's about writing. The initial chapters are written in 1 POV and have a dark-tone narration because our MC was suffering from a dark phase of his life, not a real dark phase, but its after-effects....... . . ... .. Now, in later volumes, when he comes out from his dark phase, these chapters are written in 3 POVs. These chapters are lighter in tone, with comedy blended into them... ?.. .. . ... . Another important note: throughout the story, you'll discover changes in the narration style. That's because I am a newbie and have been learning new ways to write. So you'll notice changes in style from time to time as I am learning to write better chapters day by day.. . . . . And yeah, English is like my third language.

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