Review Detail of JoelLude in Bleach: Gazing Mirage

A stupid grim-derp version of bleach that is taking far to long to get anywhere. Given that most fanfics get dropped by cha 100 to 200, the fact that at 50 mc has made what seems like no progress. As for the grim-derp part, I get suspicion at the beginning. But after 50 chap they are still threatening his life. If I was him i would have either killed myself or go live in the forest with the hollows. 0 out of 10, wouldn't read if it was the only bleach fanfic.