Honestly this deserves 4 stars, but I'm giving 5 because I enjoyed reading this, My only recommendation to the author is that you please fix the grammar, it is disastrous at times, where the reading loses the most quality is when there are internal thoughts of the characters, it looks like they are talking to someone else but actually they are just doing a monologue, it makes them look schizophrenic 😂
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