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Love_C_raft
Love_C_raftLv141yr
2023-08-26 07:29

This is my first GTA 5 fanfic, and it is going good, but I can't help notice a few downside being more of a summaries instead of character interaction, you can have character interaction first and do a few skips, don move too fast cuase it breaks immersion, but over all you are good, I will sticking for a while, and watch this goes and see your growth 馃榾. Good luck.

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Stressed_Librarian
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Thank you so much for the review! I'll keep your words in mind!

Adrian_King_676
Adrian_King_676Lv14

Did you drop this story its been 1 year since you posted anything on your account

Stressed_Librarian:Thank you so much for the review! I'll keep your words in mind!
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