ok, so so far I am only a few chapters in, and the author has created a scenario in the beginning that makes no sense, maybe some of it will make sense later, but expect to have no clue what is happening for the first few chapters. So far though, my biggest issue, is that the Author does not know male from female. Dora is a females name, but is used as a males name here. Hope is a females name, but is used as a males name here. I can only assume this will be a rolling theme throughout this book where I will have no clue who is male or female unless pronouns are used, unless the author also has typos for pronouns further confusing the audience🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️ Just wanted to let everyone know before reading🤦♂️ so prepare yourself🤦♂️
Liked it!
LIKEi read further, and I am even more disappointed in this book and author🤦♂️. If you like seeing words on a screen, then this book will do you some good, but if you want to read something that has meaning, and that you can understand, skip this "pile of words". Even if there were no typos, and no gender swapped names, I don't think I could continue with this🤦♂️ The dialogue makes no sense between the characters. It is not a matter of not knowing the history of the characters, it just simply can't make sense, no matter what context you put it in🤦♂️🤦♂️. The author tries to be cute by throwing the reader into an unknown situation in the beginning where the mc is acting out a part while the others are plotting against him. It's not cute, nor mysterious, it's just dumb. The situation is understandable if you just think of it like what I previously stated, but if you actually read it yourself, you will understand there were many things the author tried (and failed horribly) to do🤦♂️🤦♂️. When the characters have a dialogue, you will be left utterly confused without a clue as to what is happening, and you will feel like you skipped a few paragraphs of interactions between them before the responses to each other will make any sense. Even when the characters meet for the first time you will feel this way. It has nothing to do with not knowing their supposed history between them, the dialogue absolutely makes no sense. The author needs to find an editor who is competent enough to sieve through this garbage with his input to make sense of it and to redo all the dialogue and interactions between everyone. I have no idea if the story gets better after chapter 10, because if I can't understand anything until that point, I drop a book, this one was dropped for me. I would love for someone to say I am wrong, and that they understood perfectly, because I would challenge them to a 3way discussion with the author. I will point to a paragraph, they can explain what it means to them, then the author can explain what it is really supposed to mean. I guarantee they will be wrong, because they are reading something other than the words in this book, maybe they took some acid before reading so it works out for them🤷♂️ don't know, don't care🤷♂️ Don't read this book if you like stories that make sense, and have a fluid dialogue. Have a good day! Best of luck to the author to take my criticism and become a better author because of it!
thanks for your review , and don't worry , I'm confident in being a better writer now
