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Reymond_Ferin
Reymond_FerinLv131yr
2023-08-21 13:15

This book is really good. those who wanted to read a good book this one won't disappoint. its updating stability is truly amazing and even with this updating speed writing quality is not compromised. this book is a journey of emotions and hilarious moments.i Hope it continue for 1000 chapters and recieve fans approval.

Mushoku Tensei: Reincarnated as the Lightning Flash

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4.6
52 Chs

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Reymond_Ferin
Reymond_FerinLv13

nope it was written by me i apologise for any mistakes

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Reymond_Ferin
Reymond_FerinLv13

oops sorry my bad

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SleepNyx
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is this yuri?

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Reymond_Ferin
Reymond_FerinLv13

not yet but may be

SleepNyx:is this yuri?
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