Review Detail of BoltzMann in Basilisk
Review detail
Reads like a bad translation that's missing the first half of the book. Not much makes sense even when ignoring missing context and certainly doesnt feel like a HP fanfic and then suddenly LOOK OUT ITS THE CATHOLIC CHURCH!
Basilisk
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God_of_hentai:its so well written your main language must not be english
No offense, but are you for real? I know that taste is debatable, and not everyone learned the english language to the same degree, but I do have to object here.This translation can barely be considered an edited MTL: Some sentences make no sense because of wrong sentence structure and wording; the N-word is misused repeatedly, and paragraphs are rarely sensible. The only saving grace is the use of autocorect. Thus, you read english words with a semblance of meaning. Im being overly dramatic here, and it might not be as bad as I discribe it, but claiming 'amazing english' is an insult to everyone's intellect and a blatant lie.
God_of_hentai:english wise this is amazing
LittleMonkey:No offense, but are you for real? I know that taste is debatable, and not everyone learned the english language to the same degree, but I do have to object here.This translation can barely be considered an edited MTL: Some sentences make no sense because of wrong sentence structure and wording; the N-word is misused repeatedly, and paragraphs are rarely sensible. The only saving grace is the use of autocorect. Thus, you read english words with a semblance of meaning. Im being overly dramatic here, and it might not be as bad as I discribe it, but claiming 'amazing english' is an insult to everyone's intellect and a blatant lie.
I'm glad you're objective in the end with your criticism, because it's not that bad. It's ok grammar and english wise. As for the story, I find it entertaining.
LittleMonkey:No offense, but are you for real? I know that taste is debatable, and not everyone learned the english language to the same degree, but I do have to object here.This translation can barely be considered an edited MTL: Some sentences make no sense because of wrong sentence structure and wording; the N-word is misused repeatedly, and paragraphs are rarely sensible. The only saving grace is the use of autocorect. Thus, you read english words with a semblance of meaning. Im being overly dramatic here, and it might not be as bad as I discribe it, but claiming 'amazing english' is an insult to everyone's intellect and a blatant lie.
Nah, you're exagerating. There is certainly some sentences that don't make sense but it's not often. It's pretty readable and entertaining. And what you say about the catholic church... I think it's inspired by the witch hunt that happened at this time in history. Don't forget it's AU, it's written way before canon.
Eins_Mensch:Someone forgot the "Witch Hunt" that happened and the fact that this starts a long time before canon... so yeah the church is a threat. Also, didnt you read the title? this is an AU, so its not gonna be a carbon copy of harry potter moron.
God_of_hentai:maybe ive read to many mtl and i jjst learned to understand them XD tbh idk