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2024-08-04 20:20

The concept is very interesting and good, it's just that mc(author) is not creative enough to utilise the system to it's fullest potential it gets too boring after some time, and that with a not too interesting mc ,who is also a little dumb ,it just feels too much like a chore to read. Like he goes to the underground battle arena to gain fighting experience only to use his speed skill to defeat the enemy instantly...umm excuse me sir but what kind of battle experience are you gaining out of this?to be a food delivery rider fighting against time? or what? oh did i mention he is a blank minded person with no creativity ? like all of his ideas for skills are from the animes or manga or novels he has read before reincarnation. Then comes the vague system. Like no really this thing is a little too vague to be understood. what determines the cost of a skill? is it the function ? or is it the current use requirements ? why is it that skills can't be edited once they are acquired by the mc? why is the cost of some skills too high while some are too low? like an ability to phase through literal walls is not that good for it to be expensive ? it's just too damn boring and lack of creativity is very evident .

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