It was good till he left the village with her. But after it was like blindly following the story with no directions. The info dump was high.I like the story very much from it started till now. But if could clearly show where will the story progresses and reduce Infodumps on full chapters.Personal: Try to think better name for the chapters.
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Thank you very much for your review. I apologize for putting unnecessary information that may annoy. I will try to avoid filling the novel with information that is not necessary while keeping the story on track in a good way. Thank you very much for the review, it will help me to improve. On the other hand, reminds that Tang Yin at the beginning cannot cultivate, and therefore, he must look for the necessary materials to do it again, that is why he must start traveling to other places where he can get them. The direction of the story at the beginning will be focused on his search for those materials. And the chapter names issue, I'll try to improve them. I'm pretty bad at that xD, sorry. I hope you continue reading the novel, little by little I will improve everything, thanks for reading!
Cool, Don't drop it .Keep up the good work
