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2024-07-10 11:44

So far I'm really enjoying this book, please do not stop. I can only speak from my own perspective, but the storyline and characters are well developed. The story isn't over the top in any one direction, which gives it a nice balance. The POV chapters add a good amount of depth to both main and side characters. [img=More pls] Keep up the good work!

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Thank you for your kind words. I am glad you like the story. Please enjoy the read.

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Hello, Seeing as I have written this book to over 500 chapters for the last eight months, I feel like I earned the right to give myself another review. (To balance out the two braincell incels who cannot read tags.) Many things have changed since I began writing this for one people actually read it now. But in all seriousness If I were to rate my work it would still be a five. Because of the following reasons. 1. I have uploaded consistently for over 220 days as of this writing. (With multiple mass releases in between) While my Priv is expensive, I believe it is worth the price my readers pay for it. 2. My grasp of flow has vastly compared to what it once was. (So much so looking at my older chapters makes me annoyed.) 3. John and the Seven Sirens are multifaceted characters who I wrote very well. They have fears, dreams, quirks and personalities that give life to them as real people. (Give their character pages some love!) Unlike most harem book. my girls kick A! a lot of it. they are not damsels in distress, and you see how they fall in love with my MC in the Heroine Chapters in their POV. They need John as much as he needs them. and they argue, they fight but they still find their way back to each other. This is what I believe a harem should be. and I hope you like it as much as I enjoyed writing them. 4. My lore. I am quite proud of how I managed to tie so many different bits of history, mythology and fantasy. together. and like an onion, the readers accompany John as he learns and finds his place in the world. Hard to say anything because I don't want to spoil anything, but many have praised the lore. And if you give it some time, I am sure you will too. 5. Finally, the love and dedication I have given this book. With over 650,000 words as of this writing. Suffice to say I have written a lot. This book earned peanuts during the first 6 months (Missed my first MGS). However, I felt that even if it did not earn anything I wanted to finish it. I already dropped two books prior to this. The first one no one read, the second because the book died when I got covid. I wanted this book to be different. Quality wise, my work has a high standard. Unlike most authors my status screens are small. I also actively try to make them even smaller. I do not waste chapters on needless things. Each side character, each event are all part of the overarching story. Meaning of the 500 chapters up to this point. I am proud to say I do not have even one filler chapter. Each chapter is written to drive the plot forward. Apart from the research needed, each chapter needs about 2 hours. so, you can only guess how long the 500 chapters took. For reference, for my honeymoon (Smut) volume Elysium. I needed to research over 2 days before I wrote a single word. Quite happy with how it came out. Need to wrap this up. But yeah. this book is awesome. the characters are flawed, relatable and show us how even in the depths of hell, hope and joy can exist. If this work has given you some nuggets of wisdom. if it made you chuckle as the characters bond with one another. if it made your blood rush as you wondered what would happen next. Please support it. I offer all my work for Limitless to my God in heaven, to Jesus Christ my king. to whom without, I would not have been able to endure the hardship to continue writing this book. And to everyone who has supported Limitless but has stopped, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. I wish for you people all the happiness in the world. To those that read and found my work boring. Thank you for your time. I hope you find a book that brings you joy. Finally, to the readers who support the work and join me in each chapter. Thank you all. Buckle in your seats and prepare for an epic Journey. Kiss your harem in love, and lock and load. Because I promise you this. by the time Limitless has concluded. it would be a journey unlike any other. May your fate, end the darkness.

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Hello everyone, Mandatory Author review. This is my latest novel which I worked very hard on. It's about the story of an average nobody in his journey to become the strongest king in the world. MC will get a total of seven love interests. No Yuri, No NTR. No Grape. Book is in 1st person for the ultimate self-insert. MC has unique powers but is not overpowered at the beginning. Story will be separated between bits where the MC and the heroines are in hellsgate and back on earth. (Kinda like a VR game but with higher stakes). The MC cannot use fantasy weapons but will instead use Real life arms ranging from guns, bombs, tanks to even nukes. all arms and vehicles in the novel would have real life counterparts. The heroines are not wallflowers and are all fighters that will serve as the MC's squad. They too will be armed with modern arms. Main enemy of the story is the undead the MC and the Heroines are forced to fight against every night. But they will also fight political plots and have wars between every continent on the planet. The book will be comprised of Action, kingdom building and adventure. There would be romance but not enough to be considered one of the books core themes. Please note that this is a work of fiction and any similarities between people and places and events, are purely coincidental. Art for the Heroines and the Cover is done by Baswara Arts Editing is done by a paid Editor by the name of IkuSaari I hope you enjoy what this book has to offer. Enjoy the read.

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