I like the concept of the story, even though there's a huge info dump at the start. I can tell that the author crafter the world background with huge effort. There are some confusing dialogues and grammatical errors, but it can be fixed with re-edit. I hope I could see more of your story since I'm also writing a story about elves. Good job, author!
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