At chapter28Writing is easy to understand with no major typos etc.(5🌟)Updates are also quite fast, but the chapter length is small(4🌟)World background for now is interesting. (5🌟)The character design and story development both feel one-dimensional, and the outside world description and events were portrayed too simple mindset (for ex - there were only 2000 children in the whole world that were eligible for awakning and yet the awakening was done in front of every one totally leaking the awakners identity despite the threat of devil worshipers, then instead leaving in a stealthy way or something the boldly go using busses and a few others, things that should be general knowledge at least among awakeners was completely neglected(like the type of Pokemon, the area they can be found in, what happen when your Pokemon aint, the random placement in the world), there was no soul(development) in the tower world, it was like I read a dairy entry or something that was written just for the sake of it.I will read it further since the idea is good and I will rewrite my review if it gets better.
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