The moment I read that earth was destroyed, I felt sad about it. But then when I came to know that there are still 50,000 people alive, I felt a wave of relief. There is something in your characters that you may not have realized!! It's Aura. I can feel their aura even through the screen. The right amount of tension, puzzles, conflicts and solutions make your story a great piece of work!! Plz keep writing it.. And I would like to give a suggestion.. You can slow down your update frequency. There is an invisible rule in this world.." The more you can't get something, the more you want or desire it". Keep your updates at a moderate pace, like do only one chapter update a day, or five chapters update a week. This will help you attract readers attention and curiosity about 'What Happened Next?'. If you feel offended, then I apologize for it. But work is seriously worth it!!!!
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