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Mastarius
MastariusLv21yr
2023-09-07 07:18

no shazam here only system carrot and stick

Champion: Shazam in the M.C.U.

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3.2
77 Chs

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_VIIX_
_VIIX_Lv10

The title is totally misleading. But aside from that it's a decent story. And before some salty fanatic weak MC lover rants, yes I am only here for a OP MC. I saw the name Shazam and I expected to see Shazam. Sue me. I didn't expect a 1/6th of Shazam. What the synopsis should make clear is that He will become something akin to Shazam at the very end of the story. He doesn't have any of those powers so to speak. Not at the moment. Might have in the distant future. WQ(4/5): Some dialogues and scene Sequences need work. A bit of randomness makes them a bit confusing. Aside from that decent grammar. The writing style suits me as well. Good job. Story Development and Character Design (3/5): Don't really like it, don't really hate it. I expected something and got totally something else. and not the good kind. Hence I'm disappointed. But anyways it's a good story for showing progression I guess. It's still too early on saying that tho as there's so few chapters. I just hope there are a few adventures he does as a fully powered Shazam in the end. It's unlikely but one can only hope. Updating Stability(5/5): It's apparently commissioned work. Don't know how that reflects but 5/5 for me. World background(4/5): Still many things left to explore and so far so good.

1yr

Mamamesta
MamamestaLv3

It's shazam in the world of marvel and he needs a completely unnecessary system to get strong [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

1yr
DaoistMXVCw3
DaoistMXVCw3Lv4

What about this super suit????

1yr
Ronan_Caricot
Ronan_CaricotLv10

You need to change the title in the marvel with shazam system. Don't read it it just gonna waste your time. Boring if you just give the power of shazam then the story may be get interesting

1yr
Huevo_derecho
Huevo_derechoLv1

You are in the Marvel universe and you nerfed your own protagonist in such a little way 馃[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

1yr
EX_MACHINA_2553
EX_MACHINA_2553Lv1

super boring. ...................................................

1yr
Don_shofer
Don_shoferLv4

Clickbait, Clickbait, Clickbait, Clickbait, Clickbait, Clickbait, Clickbait, Clickbait, Clickbait, Clickbait, Clickbait, Clickbait, Clickbait, Clickbait, Clickbait, Clickbait, Clickbait, Clickbait, Clickbait, Clickbait, Clickbait, Clickbait, Clickbait, Clickbait,

1yr
Daoist5V1Zc9
Daoist5V1Zc9Lv1

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Mamamesta
MamamestaLv3

Boring and it's clikbait how the story goes so that the Mc has all the powers of Shazam will reach chapter 200 the story is very boring[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

1yr
Alchemist
AlchemistLv13

I hate clickbait like this... With that title I expected him to actually have the powers of Shazam. You should really change it, if you don't want to get review-bombed by people annoyed by your clickbait.

1yr
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