As a One piece fan, you already have my full attention. —An advice from me to the Author... I don't how this story will develope good or flop, whatever happens... I only have one request, don't drop it before completing it.

The only thing unbearable in this story.Blackbeard becomes a good person and joins Ace and his crew.Blackbeard is one of the only true pirates in One Piece. (For his cruelty, disloyalty and cruelty) Being loyal to Ace makes the story weird and Scary

Good story and start if a bit op but his journey and actions after dawn island are just so far out of left field that it feels like a whole diffrent character. who goes from kind boy who wished for his parents happiness and loved his siblings sabo and luffy to unrepentant mass murderer who inherited rocks will and the desire to rule the world. ooc ace and blackbeard ruined, but I would recommend for those who like world domination and easy curbstomp victory for the mc and props to the author for consistent updates and good grammar

honestly its great so far i always wanted ace to be something bigger so by the pace ur going it seems its going to be great so thanks and dont drop it

I expect a lot from this fic, I just wish that if I eat his fruit I'm sick of the few ACE fics ignoring the fire logia fruit saying they don't need it

It’s honestly one of the best written one piece fics on this app. I’m not sure if I’ll keep reading since I personally really wanted to keep Yamato as the only female lead and started excited because of the no harem tag,(I really love that tag and wish it were used more often) the author might be adding another female lead😔. But that is just a personal preference of mine and doesn’t reflect the quality of writing, which is great. Though, author, I recommend if you go through with the two girls thing that you add a harem tag and remove the no harem tag, it will alleviate a lot of frustration and stop readers from leavening hate out of frustration, and will make sure only those interested will read and you will get good and honest reviews. Thanks again for the awsome read🙏

Cheese 👍

This is far better than most of the one piece fanfics, The Mc is a little OP since the start but its not that bad to read. For one-piece fans this is good but i got quite bored in the last chapters.

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Brilliant. I am liking the way you're developing Ace and his crew. The pace is also good alongside the grammar. Can't wait for more chapters. I am shocked by such low traffic on the story, but I know it'll pick up soon.