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2024-05-24 02:57

Hello everyone! Obligatory author review. Im trying this Beasts: Reborn thing again. Three years ago I was a very different writer and person. Not a bad thing, but along the way I picked up some new skills and decided to adjusted the foundational elements of what I created. So here we are. Beasts: Reborn (Revamped). With this edition, I’m aiming for more defined arcs/volumes with quicker pacing more character realism/depth and a better balance of both positivity and darkness. In doing this, I’m also working hard not to stray from what garnered me readers in the first place. Feel free to lmk how I’m doing! If you dropped it before, pick it back up. Now. If you read to the end and are here for more, thank you and hope you enjoy. NO HAREM. NO NTR. MUCH VIOLENCE. Extra tags: Vampire, Magical realism, History, Revolution, apocalypse, academy (in part). Thanks for checking out my work and have a good day!

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NLinCH
NLinCHLv4

1. to pay respect and/or comment

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_Avatar0FFury_Author

🫡🫡🫡☝🏽

NLinCH:1. to pay respect and/or comment
WPOmega
WPOmegaLv15

I'm glad that I'd periodically check in or this app would've never told me that you started the rewrite

_Avatar0FFury_
_Avatar0FFury_Author

I did keep folks updated in the discord and on my other novels. I wish I knew once I clicked “complete” on br that meant I couldn’t touch anything on the novel ever again tho. Defintely lost some readers wit that one😭😭 glad you found us again on this side bro 🙏🤑

WPOmega:I'm glad that I'd periodically check in or this app would've never told me that you started the rewrite
Glorious_Dragon
Glorious_DragonLv15

Much like All Might, "I AM HERE". Sad to see there isn't a werewolf tag though.

_Avatar0FFury_
_Avatar0FFury_Author

… there’s an official werewolf tag in the novel what are you doing man? 💀

Glorious_Dragon:Much like All Might, "I AM HERE". Sad to see there isn't a werewolf tag though.
Glorious_Dragon
Glorious_DragonLv15

I meant in the review.

_Avatar0FFury_:… there’s an official werewolf tag in the novel what are you doing man? 💀
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_Avatar0FFury_Author

I didn’t see a need for redundancy 😃🤷🏽‍♂️

Glorious_Dragon:I meant in the review.
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NLinCH
NLinCHLv4

Since I noticed I can’t really edit my review from when the story was just out, let me write another one now at chapter 56: A hero; what is a Hero? The world knows them as saviours and protectors of humanity and civilization. As powerful warriors who don’t shy away from combat. But is that all there is to it? In a world propagandised by those who kill anything inhuman without thoughts, is it still possible for a fair open hero to exist? One who accepts life and nature as long as they don’t attack him? This story is about such a person. Claude a fledgling on his way to become a hero in his image. A beast tamer with a magically strong affinity to nature. What accomplishments may he achieve? But first he’ll have to survive introduction to his new academy. Review: Great writing that sucks one into the story; Our dear writer has actuall work and offers this masterpiece in his freetime so not a lot to complain. Whenever he stops for a while, you can be assured that it will continue (also keep up to date with his disc.); Story developments are natural and never random it may at times feel and be slow, but that’s the price for -; Perfect worldbuilding: I have never seen such in depth worldbuilding as that of AvatarOFFurY. Be it character or world, seamingly nothing is without reason. Everything is as flowing as the wild, as diverse as nature. May live find its way to more of this great story. Big thanks to all your heart work, may you have continuous success in bring others joy through your great writing, may you continue to live another day, leave behind great works to stay. Thanks

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