Review Detail of _Darker_Than_Black in RISE OF THE SUPREME RULER

Item: RISE OF THE SUPREME RULER
Rating: 3.8

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_Darker_Than_BlackLv138mth_Darker_Than_Black

So author great story just as I like an overpowered novel.But there are some problems such as1.Story is too fast paced.Try to explain everything a little.2.It seems emotionless. Dont't focus on a single character's emotion while avoiding others'. 3.MC is overpowered no doubt but why he is not using his powers. Hiding his powers like a coward. Make him intelligent not extremely cautious.4. Give some illustrations while you are at it.5. I am from India also

RISE OF THE SUPREME RULER

Graviele

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GravieleAuthorGraviele

While I agree with all other points and trying to work upon it, I don't agree with MC being a coward.He had been the reason for a direct confrontation with at least three elite families,almost killed an instructor publicly, etc.

8mth

_Darker_Than_BlackLv13_Darker_Than_Black

He and his family has the power to back up him so why should he hide his power ? Just asking cause it has become a common occurrence for mc to hide his strength and it has become boring for me.But your story is nonetheless good.

8mth

Michael_Hammond_9081Lv15Michael_Hammond_9081

Imo. Power should only be shown when necessary. I haven’t read the book yet but I’m speaking in general. Low key is almost always the way to go. However, you have to weigh the result of not showing your power vs. showing your power.

2mth