So author great story just as I like an overpowered novel.But there are some problems such as1.Story is too fast paced.Try to explain everything a little.2.It seems emotionless. Dont't focus on a single character's emotion while avoiding others'. 3.MC is overpowered no doubt but why he is not using his powers. Hiding his powers like a coward. Make him intelligent not extremely cautious.4. Give some illustrations while you are at it.5. I am from India also
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