Review Detail of Darks_Phoenix in Morningstar House (GOT)

The idea of ​​the novel is wonderful, but the writer made MC seem like he did not have the ability to change many things, such as preventing the death of Elia Martell and her children, in order to gain Martell's gratitude and ensure their alliance with him. Another example is the death of Lyanna. He could have prevented her death, but the writer made MC seem as if he did not know where she was kidnappedI suggest that the writer rewrite the novel from the beginning, in detail, and without very quick time breaks, because the idea of ​​the novel is very wonderful