Review Detail of Pra_kum in As A Gum Man In MHA

Item: As A Gum Man In MHA
Rating: 3.6

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Pra_kumLv411mthPra_kum

you need to write longer chapter bro. it's better to condense this prologue, if it will not have an impact on the story. all ROB and transmigration stuff should be finished in 1 chapter. otherwise the writing is fine. also only armament haki was put in. what abt observation haki?

As A Gum Man In MHA

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KookorachasAuthorKookorachas

I can turn the first 2 chapters into 1 and the chapter length will be more consistent, but i dont want to make the chapters longer than 1k words, the prologue is not that long with just 2.4k words but thank you for bringing that to my attention

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