Review Detail of AverageGuy01 in The Ramshackle Pack

As a completely objective person regarding the novel I’ll give it 5 stars. What? you think I‘m doing it because I’m the author. Not a chance 😉. Anyway, if you read the nove I would appreciate some costruttive comment about it. (Ex. Writing quality, grammars, pacing, etc.) Since this is my first project I appreciate any help as I would like to continue writing and evolve. Lastly, thank you to everyone who read the novel.