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Amitabha_Vardha
Amitabha_VardhaLv121yr
2023-09-03 23:41

Well I’v read and really liked it so far. My only problem is with the grammar errors here and there. Punctuation etc.otherwise the story is quite good. My advice is to have someone reread your work before you publish. Just to get rid of those Pesky errors and typos. You may not think it’ important but let’s just say in the future you hire a voice actor for an adaptation. Those missing punctuation marks etc can case a misinterpretation of how you want certain things to be read and ergo, ‘said’. Thus causing the adaptation to not portray the characters in their original light. Anyway this is only my opinion an you’re not obligated to follow it. Regardless, keep up the good work!

Level Up in Martial World

Aurelius_Imperator
4.5
363 Chs

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Aurelius_Imperator
Aurelius_ImperatorAuthor

Thank you for your review. I am trying to improve my grammar, I will get better and better at it in the future so u will see less of the grammar mistakes.

1yr
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onlycares
onlycaresLv13

If you can't find a proof reader put your chapters in grammarly before posting them to fix some of the more obvious mistakes.

Aurelius_Imperator:Thank you for your review. I am trying to improve my grammar, I will get better and better at it in the future so u will see less of the grammar mistakes.
1yr
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Aurelius_Imperator
Aurelius_ImperatorAuthor

grammarly entirely changes my words and proof read I can't give locked ch for others to read Unfortunately

onlycares:If you can't find a proof reader put your chapters in grammarly before posting them to fix some of the more obvious mistakes.
1yr
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Aurelius_Imperator
Aurelius_ImperatorAuthor

its not that bad actually u can still read it

onlycares:If you can't find a proof reader put your chapters in grammarly before posting them to fix some of the more obvious mistakes.
1yr
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onlycares
onlycaresLv13

Yeah I didn’t mean it like that, I only dropped this because it got kinda do boring but it’s not the worst I’ve seen especially for Webnovel.

Aurelius_Imperator:its not that bad actually u can still read it
1yr
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Aurelius_Imperator
Aurelius_ImperatorAuthor

could u tell me the ch in which u dropped?

onlycares:Yeah I didn’t mean it like that, I only dropped this because it got kinda do boring but it’s not the worst I’ve seen especially for Webnovel.
1yr
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onlycares
onlycaresLv13

During the arc where he was at the desert or whatever, got kinda do boring so I dropped it but other than that it was good.

Aurelius_Imperator:could u tell me the ch in which u dropped?
1yr
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onlycares
onlycaresLv13

Wait wrong book, it was chapter 8

Aurelius_Imperator:could u tell me the ch in which u dropped?
1yr
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Aurelius_Imperator
Aurelius_ImperatorAuthor

okay thanks

onlycares:Wait wrong book, it was chapter 8
1yr
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Monarch_Lord
Monarch_LordLv3

loll

onlycares:Wait wrong book, it was chapter 8
1yr
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Aurelius_Imperator
Aurelius_ImperatorAuthor

what u loling for?

Monarch_Lord:loll
1yr
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Monarch_Lord
Monarch_LordLv3

oh? you saw the message? wow (author power.) it was a reply to some other guy

Aurelius_Imperator:what u loling for?
1yr
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Monarch_Lord
Monarch_LordLv3

also, it was funny that he mixed up novels but ig thta was expected as we read way too much AND also, thanks for replying cuz I was reading ur novel in school and I almost forgot about it now, after seeing my long tabs of novels at home..

Aurelius_Imperator:what u loling for?
1yr
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Monarch_Lord
Monarch_LordLv3

also, do u have discord? lets add each other

Aurelius_Imperator:what u loling for?
1yr
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Aurelius_Imperator
Aurelius_ImperatorAuthor

yeah I have this is my discord name

Monarch_Lord:also, do u have discord? lets add each other
1yr
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Aurelius_Imperator
Aurelius_ImperatorAuthor

Alright it's been 283 ch so I wanted to clarify some things, The charm of his is actually intelligence but not the kind you are thinking but instead consciousness when it gets more stronger the more it will attract people towards him not only that his mere presence will affect people accordingly. Charm doesn't always mean physically only, and the other thing you guys might be curious about is that his purity was removed when he reached from level 8 to level 9 but it didn't when he upgraded to divine physique? that is because there was no impurity left in his body anymore that is why, simply explanation. Any more questions? you are free to ask. [img=strong]

1yr

HomieLv1
HomieLv1Lv13

You're doing well. Delete that "Plz read at least 15 chaps" because it makes you just pathetic.

1yr
Aurelius_Imperator
Aurelius_ImperatorAuthor

Just your average muscular author giving himself a 5 star because why not!!There will be some smuts but it will happen in high ch if u are curious.ps-what do u think about my pfp Should I change it or not?

1yr
xYunchex
xYunchexLv13

It seems that u are Nero, not Aurelian, how to have so many themes in your only 69 chapters? So let go of the burning Rome and come back when your novel is finished. 140 characters mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm

1yr
The_Procrastinator
The_ProcrastinatorLv13

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Rohan_Shinde_2731
Rohan_Shinde_2731Lv4

Keep it up, it's a good read and very enjoyable

1yr
Aurelius_Imperator
Aurelius_ImperatorAuthor

Like every author I give myself a five star because I am confident that you will enjoy it at least I hope. 136ch in ask any question here and I will answer to the best of my ability. [img=exp]

1yr
Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15

Hello. Is there any kind of yuri here? I hate that stuff and would like to know before reading. thanks

1yr
SWORDGOD_ETERNITY
SWORDGOD_ETERNITYLv4

is this novel dropped 🤔..................

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