Well I’v read and really liked it so far. My only problem is with the grammar errors here and there. Punctuation etc.otherwise the story is quite good. My advice is to have someone reread your work before you publish. Just to get rid of those Pesky errors and typos. You may not think it’ important but let’s just say in the future you hire a voice actor for an adaptation. Those missing punctuation marks etc can case a misinterpretation of how you want certain things to be read and ergo, ‘said’. Thus causing the adaptation to not portray the characters in their original light. Anyway this is only my opinion an you’re not obligated to follow it. Regardless, keep up the good work!
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Thank you for your review. I am trying to improve my grammar, I will get better and better at it in the future so u will see less of the grammar mistakes.
If you can't find a proof reader put your chapters in grammarly before posting them to fix some of the more obvious mistakes.
grammarly entirely changes my words and proof read I can't give locked ch for others to read Unfortunately
its not that bad actually u can still read it
Yeah I didn’t mean it like that, I only dropped this because it got kinda do boring but it’s not the worst I’ve seen especially for Webnovel.
could u tell me the ch in which u dropped?
During the arc where he was at the desert or whatever, got kinda do boring so I dropped it but other than that it was good.
Wait wrong book, it was chapter 8
okay thanks
loll
what u loling for?
oh? you saw the message? wow (author power.) it was a reply to some other guy
also, it was funny that he mixed up novels but ig thta was expected as we read way too much AND also, thanks for replying cuz I was reading ur novel in school and I almost forgot about it now, after seeing my long tabs of novels at home..
also, do u have discord? lets add each other
yeah I have this is my discord name
