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2023-08-04 08:50

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Reborn in Danmachi with a Tensura System

SaltyGamer
3.9
34 Chs

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Daoist9177NN
Daoist9177NNLv4

Why?

1yr
5
Brutality
BrutalityLv4

This is a very helpful and detailed review, thanks for leaving it. I'm sure it'll definitely help many people.

1yr
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BoredCrow
BoredCrowLv4

Insert from shadowdrevs server this you?

1yr
insert_here
insert_hereLv13

yep

BoredCrow:Insert from shadowdrevs server this you?
1yr
insert_here
insert_hereLv13

no problem

Brutality:This is a very helpful and detailed review, thanks for leaving it. I'm sure it'll definitely help many people.
1yr
insert_here
insert_hereLv13

Daoist9177NN:Why?
1yr
BoredCrow
BoredCrowLv4

What is with this braindead review insert

insert_here:yep
1yr
insert_here
insert_hereLv13

i have no clue

BoredCrow:What is with this braindead review insert
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Other Reviews
Drako0692
Drako0692Lv1

Who focuses on a harem world when he doesn't like harem and who gives him an overpowered system when he doesn't want his mc to be too overpowered

1yr

TheWaffleMonarch
TheWaffleMonarchLv4

........................................

1yr
please_be_gentle_
please_be_gentle_Lv4

a literally bad fanfic

1yr
CalvinTheLeecher
CalvinTheLeecherLv6

El autor está más preocupado por como hacer que el personaje no sea OP que en la propia historia. Una nota muy importante es que las habilidades y magias de Danmachi son inútiles salvó unas cuantas y con cualquier habilidad o magia decente, ya rompiste el "balance" con darle algo útil y el mismo se disparó en el pie al poder obtener habilidades por si mismo.

1yr
Daoist266256
Daoist266256Lv2

I like the story but i feel like Fortuna was not inculuded in a good way. Feels like all she has is a half developed cardboard personality and 1-liners that you can see in any Danmachi stories with some grammer. I also dont understand why you choose to even include her to the story. He could have gone to a diffrent familia of a newly desended god/goddess in orario and with it you could have incopareted some world development to the story.

1yr
insert_here
insert_hereLv13

...................meh..................

1yr
Mr_mysterio
Mr_mysterioLv3

What is the fetish that everyone has with the nonsense of the gods? (useless prologue) the usual op protagonist, he lacks charisma, his goddess is the goddess of luck, he has a voice in his head that gives him information about everything that exists, he is also a gusion of two souls making the god useless from the prologue

1yr
insert_here
insert_hereLv13

.............it is just not a good story

1yr
Mass_Moha
Mass_MohaLv4

this story is good so far, but please don't make it like the last one where you abuse your mc

1yr
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