My rate for this novel was so good "AT FIRST" but the more i read the more i realize the author only cares for garnering of audience and its profit, the storyline is so good at first but has the same generic "copy paste taste" that goes in cirlces each chapter and has a very slow progress on the main storyline, imagine from chapters 1-100 still no progress at all like, MC's backround is still unknown specially to (Dalhia) Ex FMC and to her Family who are so unjust, despising Dustine (MC) all the way through despite being helped by the MC himself many times over... I still read it tho but as i continue i can only down rate it more as time goes by but not unless there's a better change. otherwise hopeless author

What a very interesting story I'm not a fan of stories. But, this story has changed my attitude. I'll be glad to read other episodes to the end

At first I fell in love with the storyline but now I saw that or let me say I can see that it is just repetition trying to get people's interest, write your story and let's move to the next story what is the need of a book having over 100 chapters and yet the true identity of the main character is yet to be revealed However I can see this story as a copyright of God of war which the main character was level Garrison just the same pattern I will lose interest if there is no change no time to waste

Nice book but I don't like the way the guy keeps running after Dahlia even after everything sometimes he should just let her fall into the hands of the wicked and not bat an eye afterall she divorced him in the harshest way ever and let him move on with Natasha after all she is offering herself to him

Love and relationship which were the main focus at the beginning is fading away. It makes the story which is focusing on power and authority more repetitive

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The flow of the story is awesome, but it is incomplete and we are waiting for the past 12 days. please provide the updates

Some days back I said some things about this book to me that it was like repetition but now it has taken a new turn I love it keep on the good work bro

A good start to this story turned into recycled material and a clear word count push for probably the sake to try and have the story picked up as a contract. if that's your only goal then I hope you get it but there's a lot better ways to get more views and have a successful novel. best of luck going forward, hope you improve on story advancement and much better character development

When it started, it had a lot of potential, but then it becomes repetitive. And to be honest the more you read the more you feel like you are losing brain cells. This story could be so much more but the author is focused on face slapping scenes that don’t make any sense. If you want to enjoy this, you have to leave your brain in a safe space to read this without losing any braincells