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2023-07-25 19:26

The writing quality of this novel is superb little to no mistakes when conveying visual imagery and depicting the main character 'Emilio' Surreal experience and disconnection from the world he once resided in (earth) completely leaving into gazing upon the universe itself and seeing it reset as a whole. With the story development undergoing and the progression overall within the plot in my honest opinion I'd say that the direction the story is going in will definitely be something to ride for, as the captivating experience and surrealism used for the main stories development completely changes the entire viewpoint of the novel. There's still more time to get out an accurate depiction of Emilio's character itself and as furthermore gets introduced down the line of the story so I can only say that his personality is similar to that of fantasy isekai MCS and such but I'll be looking forward to his character development. I also love Valrick's dedication to Emilio. The world background whilst I as a reader isn't sure where the main MC's main world is set at the moment I'm assuming it's Earth 2.0. Overall this novel has great potential to be something greater and if the story goes the way I think it will end up as, it's best to assume that it turned out amazing. Keep writing author!

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