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2024-02-05 03:17

P - Perfection <3 I - I love thisss your writing style is AMAZING N - noice noice N - noice noice x2 A - awesome :D please give me more C - cool cover, its so good L - this is giving me life by reading it, lol E - epik

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Hey, Lucifer here. I'm writing this review after writing 190+ chapters. This is gonna be an honest review of my own. This was my first novel ever so have some mercy me. First of all, writing quality. I'll be honest and say it was way too bad in the starting and gradually I have improved. I even took a break and now I can say proudly that my writing skills have come to a decent level. So please endure the first few chapters. Also around 180ch I was in a bad mood and didn't edit those chapters but I'll edit them now. Now comes to world-building, man the only thing I can say about it is that even I don't believe I've written that. It's too good even for me. Now comes for our MC, Aadi. You have to know that this is a story about his life after reaching the pinnacle, so many times he'll just enjoy from the sidelines and the story would focus on his disciples because technically the world would revolve around them. As for the romance and harem part. As I said at the start of the novel, there is no harem. As for romance, well I intended to make it but I've already written almost 200 ch and the romance part is still mild. so yeah, you can say it's not romance now. Hmm, I don't have anything to add now, aside from that this was my first novel ever and it came out great. I improved a lot from it. Now the part of me going on hiatus was to focus on my new novel which is a slice-of-life novel. Now that I've settled it, I'm gonna continue this novel again. This novel is gonna be a long one, I already have content for at least 1000 chapters so you can rest assured on that part. Lastly my update rate, well it may slow now since I'm still focusing on a new one but I'll try my best to upload as much as I can. Thanks a lot for reading it, I'm really grateful. And if you're new I'll say at least give it a try. It improved a lot.

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