It was good, so far the story was one of the CMDK best fanfiction that I read. Most of the famous novel had their own fanfiction but only few for CMDK which is really frustrating. As for the improvement of the novel, I suggest that the author should not say his thoughts or explain things inside the novel which will add more mystery of why Azazel chose that power-up or why he has low souls than roy.. As for superpower, hope Azazel could gained Gojo Satoro Infinity skill even if its was restricted or Obito Uchiha invicible for 5 secs, these skill could put him par on Roy Bloodlust.. Hope the author doesn't follow Roy skills and abilities but instead counter them like instead of Frost and Lightning devil fruit, Azazel will obtain Light Devil fruit and Magma
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LIKEAlso to gathered more readers, I suggest Author should have a consistent date of releasing chapter.. like 1 or 2 chapter per day, if not 5 chapter within a week. Few will visit here bcoz it only contains less 30 chapters..
tnx man! really. tho abt the updates, I can't say much as I write only in my free time so yeaa... the pace that I'm writing, I can surely say that I can't keep it up if I followed your advice. tho I'll try in the future, so let's just see.
