Review Detail of Demonic_Kaiser in Nightmare Herald (Shadow Slave)

Only 6 chapters out, but the writing is genuinely awesome, I would say your grammar, spelling, dictation, and the flow of your paragraphs is the smoothest I’ve read from a Shadow Slave fanfic. I can’t comment much on the characters, but MC seems to be a fine lad, though he’s super naive (I hope you fix that). I really love the *thing* you did with the Nightmare trial, it completely changes the trajectory from the original story (SPOILER) I like how you just ‘killed’ the weaver.