Just imagine superman but many times stronger in stone age without any alien invasion and any super powered individuals, wearing his dress all time, using his powers against humans at every turn to solve every problem. And everyone likes and accepts him. Only Lady Stark's actions and fears make some sense. **It doesn't suit my taste.**

great love it hopes author continue it.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

you cant give a story the title "across the omni verse" if he stays in Westeros for the entirety of the story, its misleading, i mean over 70 chapters and still in one world? nope

I'll give it a 5 because I was entertained but this isn't for everyone. A lot of the story is just a retelling of the original GoT story. Like imagine a decent author wrote a summary about GoT but every now and then his OC shows up and changes things around. If it weren't for the fact that I've read all the GoT books and enjoyed them I don't think I would've liked this. Still though, grammar isn't bad, MC is likeable although he's a little too much of a protagonist sometimes.

The history is very well writed, the grammar was without any noticeable issue, world building was good as long as you have some knowledge of the histories the fanfic are based, even thou normally would be underwhelming see such a OP Mc in a low powered world, the way it was writed in fact make the history flow smoothly; the only complain I would have is that the history was marked as a "R18" but until now all such scenes had been writed off-screen, I would like to know if it will be all like this or If the author just didn't want to write such scenes with side-characters.

Good as always mate👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Представьте себе пересказ игры престолов, но при этом в некоторых главах, иногда, появляется наш главный герой, который намного сильнее супермена. Интересно ? Я в этом никакого интереса не вижу. Не понимаю зачем добавлять высокоуровнего персонажа в низкоуровневый мир. Это бессмысленно и неинтересно.

Please come back! This is an incredible story!

Excellent story. One of the best works done. Was a little worried about the crossover with Superman lore and Game of Thrones but it works. Things changed and for the better. Want more and more!