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Peerless_CucumberX
Peerless_CucumberXLv131yr
2023-08-13 14:18

the grammar really kill me, when i read it at first i dont even know if the mc is male or female, i hope the author can correct it so it make easier for reader to read it. however the plot is not bad. i enjoy it. keep up!

Beast Tamer : Start With Fire Dog

Snorlax777
4.5
304 Chs

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MadScythe
MadScytheLv13

Review: "Beast Tamer: Start With Fire Dog" Alright, so first off, the title alone has me hooked. "Beast Tamer: Start With Fire Dog" just screams epic adventures. So, what are we in for? What to Look Forward to: Buddy Time: I'm expecting some solid friendship vibes between the Beast Tamer and the Fire Dog. Think "Pokémon", but with more fire and fur. Ups, downs, and everything in between - this duo’s journey is gonna be wild. Elemental Mayhem: Fire Dog? Heck yes. But imagine all the other elemental creatures out there. I’m hoping to see some intense showdowns. Water cats, anyone? Skills & Drills: I'm betting there'll be some killer training montages. The tamer and the Fire Dog, learning the ropes, failing, succeeding, and lighting things up, literally. Epic Showdowns: Beasts with powers? That’s a recipe for some jaw-dropping battles. Can't wait to see what kinda heat the Fire Dog brings! The Real Questions: Taming beasts sounds cool, but there’s gotta be some ethical stuff going on, right? Are we friends, or is it just about control? Food for thought! The Bigger Picture: How does this beast-taming biz work in their world? Is there like a Hogwarts for beast tamers? And are there beasts that are just a no-go? The Cool Stuff: Starting with a Bang: A fiery doggo as the main beast? That’s fresh. We’ve all seen dragons and stuff, but a fire pupper? Sign me up! Diving Deep: The whole "starting" bit means there’s a bigger world out there. Legendary beasts, legendary fails, and legendary wins - the lore could be epic. Feel the Burn: Fire's not just about, well, fire. It’s passion, rage, warmth. So, I’m keen to see how that plays into the story. To wrap it up, "Beast Tamer: Start With Fire Dog" feels like a rollercoaster waiting to happen. If you're down for some fiery adventures and heartwarming moments, this is a must-read. And, seriously, who can resist a Fire Dog? 🔥🐶

1yr

Refound
RefoundLv2

This story might be slow in the beginning but I think it shows promise... Kinda like the Great Mage but in Beast tamer mode I assume... The description is good, writing style is smooth and the dialogue is put in nicely according to the characters... I'd say the author did a good job.

1yr
JaValentin
JaValentinLv3

HOW HAS THIS NOT HAD ANY REVIEWS YET?! This is so good! And very funny btw. Great character design, amazing story building. Please if you read this review don’t stop reading it!

1yr
bearnard_bear97
bearnard_bear97Lv13

I like this kind of plot that focus on cultivating pet and training them, joining competition, etc. there's some problem with grammar but its still fine. i hope you can make it better in future.

1yr
Its_Praveen
Its_PraveenLv15

I took only 1 day to read 166 chapters of this book! It's that good. I loved the concept of Pokemon type story, which different from rest of such genre books in which Mc gets dragon or Phoenix a contract beast. Here Mc gets common beasts (two contract beasts now) but their uniqueness was evident in their talents and golden finger of mc. Overall good read, grammar is okay - not so bad and not so good. I suggest all to read this book

11mth
BloodRaven
BloodRavenLv6

If you start using pokemon in your story then it is no longer an story that can be used for money unless you pay and get permission to use the pokemon characters from Nintendo, Game Freak, and Creatures. If not then it should be a fan-fiction.

1yr
Ihavetwotintin99
Ihavetwotintin99Lv2

i'll put 3 star first, i'll update the review again after you edit the grammar problem.

1yr
MoonlightPanda
MoonlightPandaLv3

Overall, it really is a great book to read. it hits the niche spot between a pokemon-esque book with cultivation aspects. One great thing about this book is the various personalities given to his spirit beast, not to mention side characters. The story itself is quite slow-paced, focused around the daily life of Riley the Beast Tamer. There are also many humorous parts which will bring out a chuckle or two. My only gripe about this book is the various spelling mistakes, grammatical errors, and misuse of pronouns. It doesn't happen too often, but you will encounter more of it here than other novels. I was looking for a Beast Taming novel and found a gem here. 4.6/5

9mth
Kiran_Kanwar_7207
Kiran_Kanwar_7207Lv3

Brother this novel is sincerely very nice but your novel Start with scorch lion was even better. Why did you abandon it.😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭Bro consider it advice or selfishness but I bet that your other novel start with scorch novel will become a bigger hit. If you make a little effort because your that movel being afast paced one. can be ended in approximately 400 to 500 chapters. And let me tell you bro completed novels have their own extraordinary charm amd It's my sincere advice to you restart that novel.

1yr
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