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It had a good start with a unique way of reincarnation but the progression of story is not good. He's still on first day of school for 7 chapters and it's mostly about revealing new characters and personality of the protag which changes frequently. Rather doing everything on first day addition of new events will help in simultaneously developing him and the other characters. I like this crossover and hope it will more exciting.

Not So Common Slice Of Life

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Thatnks for he review. I figured I'd introduce the majority of characters early, but I do understand what you mean. I'll keep your review i mind going forward