It’s ight but it is nothing that is special or will get you hooked from a couple chapters I would recommend three things one learn better about writing a fanfic two grammar need I say more and third actually research what your fanfic is about even if you already read or seen it

Good enough writing but what made me drop this is that the kyuubi is a female and she can read his memories so she know about his past life and about their world plus the fact that the mc can not hold his tongue stupidly shouting stuff that might have had him killed I hate this kind of plot and MC so this is why the low rating.

For some reason, most fan-fic author outside of Chinese fan-fic always made their MC has a big flaw, and abuse that flaw to cause trouble for the MC in all sort of way. almost like it a story written for a masochist to read. From the moment, I see the 9 tail turn into a girl, and know all the mc memory. All I can see is that 9 tail abuse the used of that memory to humiliated the mc in small or big way. Another point is, non-chinese fan-fic mc instead of having a golden finger, they have an blacken finger. There will always be something to drag the mc down to show realism. Also, why are those author trying to write story about character development from a fan-fic? Fan-fic is like a shortcut with the story that already have a world build, and character developed, that way, the story will be about how to change the plot. At this point, I really wish for the author to clarify weather the fan-fic are Chinese written or non Chinese written, since I would like to avoid the so call realism nerf.

I have caught up!! I have read countless or at least hundreds of fanfics and tens of narutos and this will receive 70/100!! The grammar is bad but it's not like I can't understand it but a small inconvenience but not bad like others, the story so for (13 chaps) is not bad, it's quite a new approach I hope but I will need to see more to give a more concrete review, also yasaka ehh, female kurama makes more sense if you think about it, dude been with two FEMALE hosts!! If the dude decides to be female it makes sense or is just me?

a great story, with a lot of power, a good protagonist and with a good direction from where the whole story is going. just thanks for everything. continues with glorious history.

Good enough writing but what made me drop this is that the kyuubi is a female and she can read his memories so she know about his past life and about their world plus the fact that the mc can not hold his tongue stupidly shouting stuff that might have had him killed I hate this kind of plot and MC so this is why the low rating.

I tried to like this novel, I really did. There are a number of silly things in this story that I just decided to overlook. Things like changing the nine-tailed foxes gender, creating nonsensical things inside the so-called mindscape like soda, tvs, and watching anime. Also ignored the fact that the Ninetales read his entire life story and can read his mind at any moment they want. But the negatives that I tried to ignore just kept piling up and eventually got me to drop the story. Like the main character suddenly deciding that he is naruto, and even starts talking like Naruto and saying his cringy catchphrases. On top of that, he just walks up to the hokage, and straight up just ask him hey, do you know any Jutsu where you can create a clone and gain its experience? He literally said this. Asking for a forbidden Jutsu that he should have zero knowledge about, and it works, because the Hokage just gives it to him.

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Good enough writing but what made me drop this is that the kyuubi is a female and she can read his memories so she know about his past life and about their world plus the fact that the mc can not hold his tongue stupidly shouting stuff that might have had him killed I hate this kind of plot and MC so this is why the low rating.