Review Detail of KK_Khine in Oath of Being Temporally Yours

Hey there, I've been diving into your story, and it's quite the rollercoaster! I'm loving the emotional depth of characters like Andromeda, but I gotta admit, sometimes the plot feels a bit confusing. It's like untying a knot sometimes. Maybe a bit more straightforward storytelling in a few chapters could help. Still, I'm hooked, and your storytelling skills are impressive. Keep it up, and find that sweet spot between complexity and clarity!😆