An okay-ish fic that gets constant sabotage from it's own author. If the mediocre writing doesn't get to you maybe the author constantly breaking the flow of the story with comments about how bad he thinks X chapter is or trying to excuse how this paragraph that makes no sense reffers to Y thing that only he knows about will do it. This fic is basically a "Tell and don't show" thing. But the tell is always done by the author telling you in AN (author notes). Now it could be better...if the author wasn't one of those authors that instead of improving preffers to remain ignorant. As he said, if you don't like it don't read it. I would recommend that you follow some of his advice and just don't read it.
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this is exactly the type of review that would stop me from reading any type of novel. tell me the author expositions his story to death, then has the gall to say "well I write for myself, if you don't like it don't read it" and I'm instantly taking their advice and looking elsewhere. thanks for the warning.
However, what if the person is lying? Of course I don't know since I haven't read it yet.
Just the fact that people like the review should already be a warning that it has some truth. Not like you need to read a lot to see it for yourself. Just at the second chapter the Author is already doing it.
I see, I will pay attention to such things
After reviewing my story I have found what you said to be true. I have stopped putting the AN which broke the immersive after that chapter. Sorry if what I said was rude as well as the fact thag you did not like the fanfic. Thanks for giving your honest review!...
You are still continuing this right? Would be a pity to see such a rare story come to an end.
personally I like your mentality about your story. This is a hobby and should be done for the fun of oneself. Too many entitled authors doing this just as a side hustle with expectations of monetization. I get wanting money, but heck it would be idiotic of me to expect people to pay me if they watch me disc golf let alone get a big head about it.
