Review Detail of Visionary_M in Defiance: Arlo

The story is engaging and also makes readers wonder what will happen next. I thought the story was a little past faced from chapter 3-5 but it was just right since the main character needs to grow. Also, I've been wondering from the start but how young exactly is the main character from the beginning and after the time lapse. Since it was described that Avianna's hair turned white from gold, I thought the timelapse was really long. Thus, I think it will really help if the author adds a few more descriptions that can help us identify the main character's age like how tall is he when compared to others, or how big his hand was when compared to the books his reading something like that. Overall the story has a new concept that was told in a creative and well written matter. Nice job, looking forward to the continuation of your novel.[img=recommend]