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HanLaYu
HanLaYuLv145mth
2024-07-03 01:15

As someone who rarely chooses to read reincarnation stories, I bought this novel after reading a few chapters. I went through a full range of emotions while reading it. The author creates a strong relationship between the trio: Woo-bin, Baek-Hyun, and Hae-won. The romance is a 10/10 for passion and devotion. Hee-won (a female) struggles with reincarnation as Hae-won (a male beta), both had their fair share of struggles in life and love. As Hae-won, Hee-won re-enters the lives of Woo-bin and Baek-Hyun, two Alphas he knew from their school days. These two handsome, wealthy Alphas are Omega haters who unintentionally cause their Beta mate to become an Omega. The storytelling is great! However, the novel isn't 5 stars for me for the following reasons. It could have been shorter and still be great. The author adds a side story randomly and in parts. The reader is informed that this will happen. For me, it broke the flow of the main story. My intention, now that I have read the main story, is to go back and read the side story. The side story could have been added at the end, as a bonus. Also, the author made comments within the story concerning what was coming up next, a new story they were thinking of writing, etc. These comments could have been at the end, in the author comment section. Additionally, there were grammar errors and misused words, but I did not often find it distracting. Would I recommend this author to others? Yes, the story was entertaining, and I binged on chapters. The trio are charismatic, so I rooted for their relationship. I was hooked from the beginning.

Alpha, Alpha, Beta? I Transmigrated into an Omegaverse as a boy?!

Byul_Byre
4.9
214 Chs

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Byul_Byre
Byul_ByreAuthor

Thank you for the review. It must've taken you quite a while to type this down and I'm very grateful, for pointing out the goods and flaws. I'll try to work harder in the future and take note of these tips. Also, the side stories added in-between were mostly at times when I couldn't focus on the main story and needed a leeway, haha 😅 Glad that you enjoyed it, see you in my next piece

5mth
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HanLaYu
HanLaYuLv14

I have already started reading the next story, and it does not disappoint. I appreciate the time you put into developing the characters.

Byul_Byre:Thank you for the review. It must've taken you quite a while to type this down and I'm very grateful, for pointing out the goods and flaws. I'll try to work harder in the future and take note of these tips. Also, the side stories added in-between were mostly at times when I couldn't focus on the main story and needed a leeway, haha 😅 Glad that you enjoyed it, see you in my next piece
5mth
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Byul_Byre
Byul_ByreAuthor

Thank you. But unfortunately, I haven't been updating recently but I'll update from next month

HanLaYu:I have already started reading the next story, and it does not disappoint. I appreciate the time you put into developing the characters.
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Byul_Byre
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As the author, it is my job to give myself a five star review 🤭🤭Anyway, the book's progress is nice, according to myself, and the plot will intrigue you if you're a fan of Omegaverse, threesomes and the rest. Here is the closest to what I have in my imagination. Once again, thank you for viewing my book

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Thanks to the latest chapter, I made the characters all by myself. I hope you like them. 🤭🤭🤭

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I am being completely honest when I say I can not get enough of this novel! I love all 3 main cast, MC & both MLs. The fact that the author is putting out not just 3 chapters a day but 3 well thought out and well written chapters a day is mind-boggling to me. I highly recommend this novel and will do a more in-depth review once it's completed. I will say that though my face hurt physically from smiling for a good portion of the novel, I also had a whirlwind of complex emotions going on while reading. I will not give spoilers. Also, the grammar (English) in the novel is not perfect, but it dang sure is close to it.

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I love the plot and I'm really looking forward to how it's going to work out with the three of them. The baby, I wonder who the actual father is. Anyway, I'm rooting for Sun Baek-Hyun ! 😎😎

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I've got to say, the writing style is great and the plot is also great. I'm enjoying every moment of this book. The author really did a great job on this. Good work

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I am so in love with this novel. It’s an amazing roll coaster of emotions. I had to keep my tissue near me as I read. Heart touching.

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