Item: Alpha, Alpha, Beta? I Transmigrated into an Omegaverse as a boy?!
Rating: 4.2
Author: HanLaYu

HanLaYuLv149mth

2024-07-03 01:15

As someone who rarely chooses to read reincarnation stories, I bought this novel after reading a few chapters. I went through a full range of emotions while reading it. The author creates a strong relationship between the trio: Woo-bin, Baek-Hyun, and Hae-won. The romance is a 10/10 for passion and devotion. Hee-won (a female) struggles with reincarnation as Hae-won (a male beta), both had their fair share of struggles in life and love. As Hae-won, Hee-won re-enters the lives of Woo-bin and Baek-Hyun, two Alphas he knew from their school days. These two handsome, wealthy Alphas are Omega haters who unintentionally cause their Beta mate to become an Omega. The storytelling is great! However, the novel isn't 5 stars for me for the following reasons. It could have been shorter and still be great. The author adds a side story randomly and in parts. The reader is informed that this will happen. For me, it broke the flow of the main story. My intention, now that I have read the main story, is to go back and read the side story. The side story could have been added at the end, as a bonus. Also, the author made comments within the story concerning what was coming up next, a new story they were thinking of writing, etc. These comments could have been at the end, in the author comment section. Additionally, there were grammar errors and misused words, but I did not often find it distracting. Would I recommend this author to others? Yes, the story was entertaining, and I binged on chapters. The trio are charismatic, so I rooted for their relationship. I was hooked from the beginning.

Alpha, Alpha, Beta? I Transmigrated into an Omegaverse as a boy?!

Byul_Byre

4.7

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Byul_ByreAuthor

Thank you for the review. It must've taken you quite a while to type this down and I'm very grateful, for pointing out the goods and flaws. I'll try to work harder in the future and take note of these tips. Also, the side stories added in-between were mostly at times when I couldn't focus on the main story and needed a leeway, haha 😅 Glad that you enjoyed it, see you in my next piece

9mth

HanLaYuLv14

I have already started reading the next story, and it does not disappoint. I appreciate the time you put into developing the characters.

Byul_Byre:Thank you for the review. It must've taken you quite a while to type this down and I'm very grateful, for pointing out the goods and flaws. I'll try to work harder in the future and take note of these tips. Also, the side stories added in-between were mostly at times when I couldn't focus on the main story and needed a leeway, haha 😅 Glad that you enjoyed it, see you in my next piece

9mth

Byul_ByreAuthor

Thank you. But unfortunately, I haven't been updating recently but I'll update from next month

HanLaYu:I have already started reading the next story, and it does not disappoint. I appreciate the time you put into developing the characters.

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