Review Detail of Marmora in Power is Everything || ASOIAF X HxH fic

For the standards of Fanfic on this site, this story is very good. To be honest, I stopped reading in chapter 4 because I didn't like the main character, so I'll give my review of what I've read so far. There are some things that are uncomfortable for me, like the main character being a classic hero who saves the princess at the right moment, thus making her fall in love. Or some chapters are gigantic, like chapter two could easily be divided into three. I could be wrong, but I'm almost certain that the author is from the USA, given that the main character's personality is the same as that of all Fanfics by USA authors. One thing I don't really like is that it seems like I'm always reading the same main character with a different skin. Not to mention that I don't find the personality of this type of main character very interesting. But aside from these things that bothered me, I had a very pleasant surprise, something I didn't expect. Something that I thought would happen one way, happened another way. That was something I missed, nowadays most things are predictable. Regarding Nen, the author is blessed with an understanding of how Nen's categories work. But there are still some errors, but just by understanding how the 6 categories of Nen work, I will ignore any other errors. And since it's a Fanfic where Nen is placed in another world, the author can make a mistake or change some of Nen's rules and say "I do what I want, I'm the author and the work is mine," and there's no way to argue with that, so it stays as it is.