The concept of the fic is quite intriguing and feels like a fresh breath of air compared to other more blatant fix it fics. Harry feels like an actual child who might seem and present himself as unreasonably mature, but we see glimpses of naïveté and childishness in funny and organic little glimpses. I absolutely adore the way he approaches magic and the people around him, and I can’ reiterate enough how refreshing it is to actually read how canon characters are adapting and reacting to a different Harry. I’ve read way too many fics where everyone almost seems hypnotised to act like canon with Harry, even though literally everything is different and should be interpreted and approached as such. I can’t wait to further read how he develops, and the story unfolds

if you don't like a main character who keeps giving his golden finger (cheat, system, unique power) to everyone this story is not for you…………………………………………………

This fic is great! I will start saying what can be a problem for some people, the author can be quite long winded (I believe is the term, the explanations take a while), it's not bad and easy to skip if is not your deal, but the story (keep in mind that at the point I am writing this there is only 6 chapters) focus a lot in how Harry learn things so the explanations make sense. And second, this is kinda a system story, I know that this can be a turn off for some people, but is not like "harry wake up with a system" kind of story, the system work like a type of acclumency, his mind organize itself in this ever evolving (still just 6 chapters, so ever evolving can change) kinda of system, it doesn't give quests and stuff, but can make him very powerful, not op. Having said that, the story is great, Harry doesn't seems like a adult in a body of a child, something that happen way to often in fics where the MC is or start as a kid. His progress is fun to follow, not having those insane jumps of abilities. The writing... I can judge, I am not a native speaker and if it's not a MTL I hardly notice a difference in grammar. It's way to soon to speak about stability of updates, but the author have a stellar track record, so I not worry of this being dropped. If something change I will probably say it in the comments of this review.

it is a story written by Burnable, enough said. read all of them all amazing.

Hello folks of Webnovel, it is the one and only Altered, I come with praises for the mastermind Burnable and another of his amazing works. I normally don't do reviews, but i have always enjoyed Burnables' stories and this one is no different. If you're looking for a subdued slice of life that doesn't take hundreds of chapters for an arc then this is the story for you. So I implore you to give the story a chance. Happy reading everyone.

awesome story ...........................................................................................................................................................

This story is easy to read due to its proper grammar and flow. Throughout the story the "system" gets stronger through Harry actually learning new things and adding them himself without any higher power. When reading expect a lot of slice of life type chapters and barely any action.

Great story, like always from burnable. It features Harry who is making his own system piece by piece. It is a interesting approach to incorporate a system in the Harry Potter world. Looking forward to how this story goes whether it is the plot, character development, further explanations of how magic work, or how Harry's system continues to develop.

This is an excellent story that I read over 3 days. It has many things in it that readers love. I completely recommend it as a story for everyone. Has some violence, no sex per se. Many races and legends.