Review Detail of ThreyaMidnight in FORE GOD

1. You can fix your synopsis.2. i feel like you're just spamming a thesaurus with deeper words to the point that your sentence does not make sense. I know using deep words are enticing but don't overdo it.3. Pleade update consistently.4. I saw that you're literally beggimg people to review your story on their own stories. Stop that. Go to the WN forum if you want a review swap. There's a proper avenue for that.5. Please work hard.These are my honest opinion that you're looking for. I hope this helps.