Really good story and well written. Few things I would recommend would be give mc Fiba experience maybe playing of under 19 team or just have him join the team USA training camp. Also I think you would've had a better plot if you made him the rival of the generation of miracles instead of a teammate so we will see him really struggle winning against teiko and have him find diamond in the rough players and help them develop their skill because if he stays in teiko mid high would be boring arc for me
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