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Dio_Brandon
Dio_BrandonLv41yr
2023-08-12 04:39

The story was good but the author made 2 mistakes for me, 1 wanting to put more girls even having saki, mikan and Serenity. he failed 2 is the trips to other worlds you have a big world with several animes and history and he wastes it with the trips, you would have expected after 70 or 100 chapters to develop your world. If you like big harems, 6 or more girls, and trips to other worlds, it's for you, but it's not for me.

Danganronpa: The Tale of Hifumi Yamada

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4.7
279 Chs

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Dio_Brandon
Dio_BrandonLv4

Google translator

1yr
Yorgan
YorganLv12

Agreed, fic was good until author decided to put a bunch of diff systems and this world hop bs. The setting was good and the used animes world was good, but author just had to fkd it up and then keep crying about lack of readers.

Dio_Brandon:Google translator
1yr
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Mistyar
MistyarLv4

I'm quite tired so ill say it out right I like It quite a bit. Onto the review Writing Quality: 4/5 First chap had emojis but I diddnt see anymore after that which was a good choice grammar is nice but sometimes youll see words that have diff letters at the start common mistake on this but not too bad. example: "hood" instead of good but doesn't really mess up the reading experienceStory Development: Good. I'm tired thats itCharacter Design: Most are from dangonronpa but you get up most respect for saving saki also Hassan Of Serenity Is my favorite assain good stuff Author. Updating Stability: 6 chaptera a week what else do you want? World Background: First World Is a missmash of different world's I liked it. Not Too cluttered aswell. Reffering to "First World" as I said Its a multiverse story I like those. To Author I know this isnt as popular as your other works but I see potential in this. Thanks for reading this terribly cooked review.

1yr

Lucifer515
Lucifer515Lv4

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aiden_rivera
aiden_riveraLv4

good butt(hehe) harem thing kinda brought it down ngl

1yr
Orsted_sama
Orsted_samaLv3

Please stop adding these nonsense emojis... Everything fine but these emojis make the story cringey... Don't like it! It make you feel like you are reading a story of a beginner author who doesn't know how to write... Author-san this is a request from me please edit the story by removing out those emojis.

1yr
SaintPiccolo
SaintPiccoloLv1

I'm disappointed. I'm disappointed in everything. I don't want to write more than that................................................................................................... ...................................................................... ..............................

6mth
urdumb
urdumbLv4

before i start reading i hope i can know the current harem members or te total no. of girls in harem , because the last thing i want is the mc to catch girls like pokemon.

1yr
Othermane
OthermaneLv4

I enjoyed this very much. Some mistakes in the writing. I also would like more detailed chapters if you know what I mean ;) Hope you do your best author

1yr
Teraten
TeratenLv13

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1yr
Laywinn
LaywinnLv4

Only on chapter 50 as of this review. However, this is a really great read, and I would fully reccomend to try it.

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