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yunjun
yunjunLv141yr
2023-07-15 06:21

Excellent start. The characters are well-designed, especially Arthur, the protagonist. From what I've seen so far, he seems to be a complex and interesting person. Moreover, his initial confusion after regression and interactions with family, as well as new goals, feel believable. There is not much I can say about the story development, since it's only the beginning, but the concept is interesting. I'm curious about his past and how he will proceed from now on. The writing style is great, nothing to criticize here. Overall, very promising, would recommend!

Return Of The Strongest Player

AceAmbrosia
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288 Chs

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Immortallord
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Try out the novel. Eradawn: Mythos Unveiled. This is really a great and awesome novel. Truly one of a kind that I believe is unfair for others nit to see. I hope we can all support this novel. You will all love it without a doubt, just give it a chance. I really love this novel, and I think the author has more greater things installed for us. Thanks a lot.

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AceAmbrosia
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Shameless 5 star author review! This is my second work (WPC), and I put a lot of hard work into this. I believe I've improved significantly since the start of my first novel. This novel is a tower-based regression story about a man at the pinnacle of power and the Heaven's Spire. It's a story about vengeance, and, occasionally, familial bonds. Just a side note. The release of this novel will not affect uploads of "The Horatius Era" in any way or form. Also, any questions you may have can be answered in the comments below.

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ApostleOfDestruct
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I've read the author's previous works, and I have to say that he does not miss. This novel, like the other, is amazing. The word choice is immaculate, while the structure of the plot is strong.

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The_AM
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It's not bad the main problem is that he just keeps on making amateur mistakes and rushing things even though he says he'll take his time. He also does extra and unnecessary things. Overall I don't feel like the mc is a 42 year old man out for revenge, but rather a child with a little power who's really arrogant but also low-key. His biggest problem is that he takes unnecessary risk and that makes him unlikable, since it feels like he's wasting his second chance

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corey_craig_2606
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Couldn't really get past 30 chapters. The first handful of chapters showed promise but after that things slowly went downhill until i just stopped reading. The story is readable for many i guess but for me, there is to many small cringe moments and unnecessary antagonistic moments/people that aren't believable.

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At first, I thought this novel was going to be pure garbage, I was wrong. The author has an excellent choice of words and the writing is simply a chefs kiss.

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Love the tower based story, was always a fan of them since tower of god. Have great hopes for this.! So far the story is going great and was a awesome read!

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this is a great book A Man threathen to the Beasts, it reminds me of a book, and both look great. The story writing is great and the development of characters drags you read more and more. what's next what's next All you have to do is wait. great work author

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