Review Detail of MrLollip0p in Nexus: I Can't Make Portals?!

you have great potential as I struggle but your writing suffers from over-symbolism. every single thing symbolizes something, idk of it's crucial to the plot but it's tiring to read. the description doesn't focus on the main parts and only skims through them. eg, the diplomas and awards in the admins office geld no meaning but they were brought up for two paragraphs or so. I believe should just try to show more and tell less. our journey as author's is a long but cheers to improvement and every step we take to better our craft🚀