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2023-10-11 02:30

truly an interesting concept and the system is fun enough for my taste. My issue with this novel is that I might know too much about war and history to get immersed in the story. A lot of the battle scenes feel like it's an action flick when it's based during The Great War. Examples being no trench warfare descriptions leaving it feeling like it's a ww2 time period instead. Also small thing for me; and could totally be explained as authors own world stuff, but by the time mark V tanks were introduced the war was basically over and done with. Like within the same month they were deployed the war was won. Just doesnt make much sense to me for the enemy to be doing counter offensives when the end is as close as it is. anyways that's my two cents good job on the novel and good luck.

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