The storyline is nice and will be a huge success if you can just add a bit of realism to it… The main character is a man with stats in the thousands and he hits a man (according to you) ”as hard as he could” with a stat probably not even in the hundreds and he just fell unconscious…(Chapter 5) How does that work? That’s just one part of the story i find stupid to be frank As a level one, he won stats probably meant for levels in the five hundred or thousand and he was just able to roll with it easily… Fantasy or Reality, multiply your current body stats by ten and you will rip your door off it hinges, make cracks on the floor when you are walking unless you can control it And now a man(ordinary with no redeeming qualities except for his luck to me at least) got his stat from something like 30 to 34,880 and was just able to roll with it… And the way conversation are being held, is this Cartoon Network? Your grammar is good man maybe the reason i read more than a chapter but I’m done mate I don’t even want to talk anymore if you want to, you can change it and if you don’t want to, none of my business anymore
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I totally understand and agree with you, especially the way author keep mentioning how deep their bond and trust is to the point that it feels unrealistic, it just too much for me to keep seeing the author keep describing how deep the bond is and how he keeps making it even deeper, and at this point it just feels like I’m watching a cartoon in a cartoon movie and not worth my time anymore.
Fr man Has it improved though?
Mudd:I totally understand and agree with you, especially the way author keep mentioning how deep their bond and trust is to the point that it feels unrealistic, it just too much for me to keep seeing the author keep describing how deep the bond is and how he keeps making it even deeper, and at this point it just feels like I’m watching a cartoon in a cartoon movie and not worth my time anymore.
